BadDodo Posted May 28, 2016 Share Posted May 28, 2016 3 hours ago, Jeremy Stieglitz said: This is cool *Faints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rippy Posted May 29, 2016 Share Posted May 29, 2016 Congratulations @Trentifus on your poetry thread mention in the community crunch, you bloody earned it ya parrot!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted May 29, 2016 Author Share Posted May 29, 2016 On 5/27/2016 at 9:46 AM, Jeremy Stieglitz said: This is cool Thank you so much @Jeremy Stieglitz! The acknowledgement of an Administrator is surely the best thing that has happened since the thread was mentioned in the Community Crunch #49. I encourage you to try a poem of your own! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted May 29, 2016 Author Share Posted May 29, 2016 Community Crunch #49 Awaking from my slumber, Notifications of some number, I realised that the day has finally come, My heart beating like a well tuned, ancient drum. Recognition of the highest kind, Nearly made me lose my mind, A mention in the Community Crunch, I have some people to thank a bunch. @Rippy for always being by my side, Considered by @Titanius to by my IRL bride, @BadDodo a newly formed alliance, @Kaprodonychus the master of genetic science, Creating dossier's, liked by the faithfull @Jen, @FireStormRising mentioned yet again, Some early inspiration from @IDNeon and @Martyn, If I ever was to meet @Jeremy Stieglitz, I would share with him a carton, @d1nk for taking the time to peruse this thread, I hope that @ciabattaroll does not think im braindead, A shoutout to @Rancor, his efforts in poetry a straight A+, I encourage all members to try atleast, this thread is not for me but us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rippy Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Big Lizards I like Dinos, they're great, I think about them when I... Shut the gate, The come in different sizes, large, wide and small, Much like Pokemon, I want to catch them all! Walking around with my Dodo by my side, I try to gather berries and hide, Resting for the night in my humble abode, Healing from the Diliophosaurus poison, my stamina slowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted May 30, 2016 Author Share Posted May 30, 2016 3 minutes ago, Rippy said: Big Lizards I like Dinos, they're great, I think about them when I... Shut the gate, The come in different sizes, large, wide and small, Much like Pokemon, I want to catch them all! Walking around with my Dodo by my side, I try to gather berries and hide, Resting for the night in my humble abode, Healing from the Diliophosaurus poison, my stamina slowed. @Rippy, well done my friend! This is a great poem, a true reflection of your feelings in-game. I hope to see more of your work in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titanius Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 3 hours ago, Trentifus said: Community Crunch #49 Awaking from my slumber, Notifications of some number, I realised that the day has finally come, My heart beating like a well tuned, ancient drum. Recognition of the highest kind, Nearly made me lose my mind, A mention in the Community Crunch, I have some people to thank a bunch. @Rippy for always being by my side, Considered by @Titanius to by my IRL bride, @BadDodo a newly formed alliance, @Kaprodonychus the master of genetic science, Creating dossier's, liked by the faithfull @Jen, @FireStormRising mentioned yet again, Some early inspiration from @IDNeon and @Martyn, If I ever was to meet @Jeremy Stieglitz, I would share with him a carton, @d1nk for taking the time to peruse this thread, I hope that @ciabattaroll does not think im braindead, A shoutout to @Rancor, his efforts in poetry a straight A+, I encourage all members to try atleast, this thread is not for me but us. @Trentifus I am so proud of you! your dedication to ensure everyone has a voice in the poetry forum, and your ability to give constructive feedback to help us improve our skills at poetry is second to none! You really are an inspiration! @Rippy and I are so proud to be your closests friends on the ARK. I would like to write a poem to show my appreciation and congratulate you, but it seems @Rippy beat me to it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titanius Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 On 5/29/2016 at 10:34 AM, Rippy said: Congratulations @Trentifus on your poetry thread mention in the community crunch, you bloody earned it ya parrot!! Please refrain from name calling in this thread @Rippy, did you know people get reported for less!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rippy Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 1 minute ago, Titanius said: Please refrain from name calling in this thread @Rippy, did you know people get reported for less!!! Sorry @Titanius, it is actually a nice term that me and @Trentifus use. An in-joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titanius Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Just now, Rippy said: Sorry @Titanius, it is actually a nice term that me and @Trentifus use. An in-joke. I appologise @Rippy, I did not mean offence either, I was just saying not all people can understand that your comment was TIC in its context and may have perceived it to be attached with more malice! I Look forward to seeing you on the ARK shortly and I apreciate all teh help you have given me, perhaps you could write a poem about your escapades, a story too? Thoughts @Trentifus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titanius Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 At the Request of @Trentifus, (Poem Folder Admin and recipient of the Community Crunch #49 Award, MNR, OAM), I am submitting this poem in his honour: Being Friends with the Best Being Friends with the Best poem writer has its perks, Like listening to the reactions of others, the "eeeeeks" and "shirks". I am always inspired to do my very best, I feel as though when I click "Submit", Its putting me to the test! A fair marker, my teacher @Trentifus is, Unlike @Rippy, his comments are full of bliss. Looking forward to improving every day, Commited to excellence, in a very poetic way. Getting requests from my idol, so submit something so close to my heart, makes me work hard, and sometimes I get worried about where to start! But after seekign advice, and clarification on my content, I feel confident in the poems and feelings I present. Knowing my best friend @Trentifus is always ready to pop, Means maybe one day I will be the one to reach the top! A spot in Community Crunch is where I have my sights set to beam and being friends with the best will help me reach my dream! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 6 hours ago, Trentifus said: Community Crunch #49 Awaking from my slumber, Notifications of some number, I realised that the day has finally come, My heart beating like a well tuned, ancient drum. Recognition of the highest kind, Nearly made me lose my mind, A mention in the Community Crunch, I have some people to thank a bunch. @Rippy for always being by my side, Considered by @Titanius to by my IRL bride, @BadDodo a newly formed alliance, @Kaprodonychus the master of genetic science, Creating dossier's, liked by the faithfull @Jen, @FireStormRising mentioned yet again, Some early inspiration from @IDNeon and @Martyn, If I ever was to meet @Jeremy Stieglitz, I would share with him a carton, @d1nk for taking the time to peruse this thread, I hope that @ciabattaroll does not think im braindead, A shoutout to @Rancor, his efforts in poetry a straight A+, I encourage all members to try atleast, this thread is not for me but us. I take that when you mean by me being a master of genetic science, you mean by my hybrid creations. Also is the creating dossiers part still about me or is that about Jen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted May 30, 2016 Author Share Posted May 30, 2016 9 minutes ago, Kaprodonychus said: I take that when you mean by me being a master of genetic science, you mean by my hybrid creations. Also is the creating dossiers part still about me or is that about Jen? Hey @Kaprodonychus, thats correct! I love the dossiers you have created, Are you working on any others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 5 minutes ago, Trentifus said: Hey @Kaprodonychus, thats correct! I love the dossiers you have created, Are you working on any others? I'll continue making them. I've added 3 or so last night. I've also got a deviant art page for some creatures as well as a fan fic in the forums as well. The fan fiction features the creatures i use in my dossiers, showing abilities that I didn't mention in dossiers. glad to see that others appreciate my love for ark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemonboat Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 The stonecutter The morning heat the cold at night soon with a sword i will fight Dreaming is dangerous watch out for the gorge damn it to craft it i need a refining forge Stone, stone and more stone excuse my manners i dont mean to groan When will this gathering of stone stop another beach a forrest and a hilltop Metal i need in large amount let this last gathering round count Stone, stone and more stone now pick up your feet i glare into the distance and realize my stonefort is complete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted May 31, 2016 Share Posted May 31, 2016 Ill have a go When the beasts comes out at night The night sky was quiet and sly The predators come out when the herbivores lie However a new beast comes out to play When it wakes the people all stray Because this predator is a natural hunter So you better hide or it’ll outrun ya Now I sit here with a raptor by my side Alone in the dark where the Praedirusuchus’s hide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted June 1, 2016 Author Share Posted June 1, 2016 Great additions to the thread @Lemonboat and @Kaprodonychus! I like the references to the very real struggles of like in the ARK, 'stone, stone and more stone'... Hit me deep! Kap, your descriptive picture of the dangers that the night brings ran true also, It took me to an all too fimilar place, when the dark falls and your gamma settings a set to normal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 Taming triceratops' are painfully long if I could, I would have carried a gigantopithecus around if I was strong the herbivore lays down in the mire eating narcotics while I make kibble over the fire. above the hill I can see a beast that began to hunker a Jacko belonging to a Junker leaving the triceratops, I ran to the old temple and hid under the debris dear creators they've come to get me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BadDodo Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 A Ballad I though off while cooking kibbles Why can't I run like, the big tribes do? Raptors and Bears, run faster than you Why can't I swim like, the big tribes do? Itchys and Mantas, always run away Why can't I fly like, the big tribes do? Argent and Pteras, blocked by the plant X How can i tame those that is wild Narcos and darts wont help you at all A hints for those, whom seeketh the art of kibblin' Start a lookout for eggs, soaring up high, and start stealin' Bins are firin', with cooking, powdered n' oiled up Pour in the water, eggs n' jerkies Bring in the thatch , fibers and berries Carrot potato, Corn and lemons Grind the powder, fire it up. There's the kibble, twas the only thing I need Tranquilizer, darts and arrows Notched one arrow, straight up to the sky One down, Let the kibble do the rest Filled @Trentifus boat, with beast unseen before Cant fit no more, got nowhere to hide it I just sit down, waiting for a friend @Rippy oh where art thou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rancor Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 *Ahem* A Haiku! Titled: This one time in ARK... Walking through forests Something moves through shrubbery Giga eats my face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rancor Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 Oh I'm inspired today! Here is one called: Grind Anky Spanks Metal Metal, Metal, Metal Farm Farm Metal, Metal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trentifus Posted June 3, 2016 Author Share Posted June 3, 2016 Angry Birds Argentavis and Pteranodon, Quetzal and Dimorphodon, Flying high up in the sky, well above any cloud, Avioding the bite of the Giga, his roar ohh so loud, There is another flappy bird looking thing, His attack a special kind of health draining sting, Meganeura, the ancient relative of the dragonfly, Once I saw 10 of them devour a lonesome guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dari Posted June 4, 2016 Share Posted June 4, 2016 Haiku A dodo army 'Strength in numbers' I was told That expression: A LIE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velraptor Posted June 7, 2016 Share Posted June 7, 2016 I wrote these for a class a couple months ago...figured they'd fit right in here. Triceratops With thrice-horn’ed head, with high crested brow Thou trudgest ‘cross the plain—in search of plant And berry too, to fill like hungered cow Thy belly with the fruits of earth so scant! Away to lands of warmth wherein the cold You may escape—along with more in herd Behind—you lead, you guard, the young enfold, Thy vital role by herd on thee conferred. At last! The forest green appears ahead, Like thunder dost thou run toward retreat! To leaves and dew; to eat and drink the spread Provided thee by Mother Earth replete. Until it seems, the land o’errun, thou must Move onward, leaving ‘hind the burning dust. Velociraptor In cover of the night and grass you hunt Three friends with thee, unseen by prey asleep. Be quiet now! Suppress thine hungered grunt. Lest by the sound the watchmen sense thy creep. ‘Neath branch and leaf, o’er root and vine thy claw Taps nearly silently, the taste of meat Already in thy mind; soon in thy maw With razors used to tear the flesh so sweet. A look to friends to send a sign to kill And feast upon the prey asleep in peace. Now soon the call will surely come, the trill, The sign! And now upon the sound release! Attack! With vicious noise and savage mind The bounty—feast within own nest confined! Pachycephalosaurus See yonder maid with skin a reddish hue— A glance, perchance, or happenstance a touch, A brush on hilltop green and berries blue So sweet exchanged in soft-clawed lovers’ clutch Another’s gaze: a suitor to compete. Bone-crested head drawn low prepared to strike With bony plate; with lovers jealous bleat The charge! And crash! from horn’ed head and spike. A momentary daze, not long until With planted foot prepared to fend the blow, Again he comes, his need to take the hill. Impress the lass and love-struck suitor throw! Here comes the strike—a chance to prove his worth! Such strength! Defeat. The way of all the earth. Pteranodon To soar above the clouds! The wish of all Who ever lived below—confined to ground, Resigned alone to hear the heavens call. No hope of flight, but earthy sights and sound. Not so for thee! Thou lucky flying beast! To take to sky! To fall and fly! Below— But only seen and heard, not envied least. For food and rest alone thou needest slow. To see what things are never seen by those Whose place it is to wander down beneath. To go where none but thee have ever chose! The rights to none but thine thou canst bequeath. To soar! To fly! To see and smell and hear! Float with clouds! O’er horizon disappear! Tyrannosaurus Thou king of kings! Thou beast of beasts! Here roar! Thy land to guard! Thine house to hold! Revere! To dominate and subjugate by war! With all and any who would dare come near! Thy kingdom to command with will and strength! To keep in check the lesser carnivore! At times to yield, and yet always at length To return to conquer forevermore! To trust in thee—thine own always adore— Is safety found when underneath thy wing. To steal from thee is death by tooth and gore. The great of beasts, the old and timeless king! Alas, can any truly be so great? No…thy puny arms even thou dost hate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BadDodo Posted June 9, 2016 Share Posted June 9, 2016 On June 4, 2016 at 7:34 PM, Dari said: Haiku A dodo army 'Strength in numbers' I was told That expression: A LIE The last line of your haiku has like, 6 syllable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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