ElfLord Posted March 1, 2016 Author Share Posted March 1, 2016 WOW! 200 views! Thanks you! Thanks to all the people who have read this and continue to read about Chris' adventure. Thank you guys so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted March 1, 2016 Share Posted March 1, 2016 5 hours ago, ElfLord said: WOW! 200 views! Thanks you! Thanks to all the people who have read this and continue to read about Chris' adventure. Thank you guys so much! Congrats man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted March 1, 2016 Author Share Posted March 1, 2016 1 minute ago, Kaprodonychus said: Congrats man! Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback both you and @IdkLol have given me along the way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdkLol Posted March 1, 2016 Share Posted March 1, 2016 14 hours ago, ElfLord said: Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback both you and @IdkLol have given me along the way! It's a good read. Keep it up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdkLol Posted March 2, 2016 Share Posted March 2, 2016 I just want to say.. I think it is amazing how you've, not only taken the criticism, but also applied it to your writing. In my opinion, I feel that your style has drastically improved and made for a much better read and significantly easier to follow. The slowing down and adding in more detail with longer chapters has greatly improved. Just keep up the details. Paint the picture of the story and environment with the words. This is a great story and I am excited to see what happens next! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted March 2, 2016 Author Share Posted March 2, 2016 9 hours ago, IdkLol said: It's a good read. Keep it up!! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted March 2, 2016 Author Share Posted March 2, 2016 4 hours ago, IdkLol said: I just want to say.. I think it is amazing how you've, not only taken the criticism, but also applied it to your writing. In my opinion, I feel that your style has drastically improved and made for a much better read and significantly easier to follow. The slowing down and adding in more detail with longer chapters has greatly improved. Just keep up the details. Paint the picture of the story and environment with the words. This is a great story and I am excited to see what happens next! Personally, the criticism on here is the only stuff I've got but hopefully soon I can get my friends perspective on it before I post. Thanks, I like to think I have a very different style of writing but I'm not sure about that yet (hopefully it will develop along the way). Yeah slowing down was/is definitely my biggest problem starting but hopefully I can as you said paint the picture of the story (which I will definitely use later) and make it a strong story that is enjoyable. Thanks again to you and Kaprodonychus for the help (and hopefully continued help) with Chris' story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted March 2, 2016 Share Posted March 2, 2016 1 hour ago, ElfLord said: Personally, the criticism on here is the only stuff I've got but hopefully soon I can get my friends perspective on it before I post. Thanks, I like to think I have a very different style of writing but I'm not sure about that yet (hopefully it will develop along the way). Yeah slowing down was/is definitely my biggest problem starting but hopefully I can as you said paint the picture of the story (which I will definitely use later) and make it a strong story that is enjoyable. Thanks again to you and Kaprodonychus for the help (and hopefully continued help) with Chris' story. yeah I'll be with you every step of the way. don't forget you can use my dossiers if you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdkLol Posted March 2, 2016 Share Posted March 2, 2016 10 hours ago, Kaprodonychus said: yeah I'll be with you every step of the way. don't forget you can use my dossiers if you want I'll be here as well. I get bored at work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 7 hours ago, IdkLol said: I'll be here as well. I get bored at work 17 hours ago, Kaprodonychus said: yeah I'll be with you every step of the way. don't forget you can use my dossiers if you want Thanks so much guys, I really appreciate the advice you guys give. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 3 hours ago, ElfLord said: Thanks so much guys, I really appreciate the advice you guys give. No problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 Btw I have one more assessment to complete and two more exams (the exams are next week) so I might have time to get to do some more work on chapter 3 for my fan fiction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 1 hour ago, Kaprodonychus said: Btw I have one more assessment to complete and two more exams (the exams are next week) so I might have time to get to do some more work on chapter 3 for my fan fiction Sweet, can't wait! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdkLol Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 On 3/3/2016 at 10:18 PM, Kaprodonychus said: Btw I have one more assessment to complete and two more exams (the exams are next week) so I might have time to get to do some more work on chapter 3 for my fan fiction I didn't know you were doing one as well. So I went and read it. It's a good read as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted March 5, 2016 Share Posted March 5, 2016 6 hours ago, IdkLol said: I didn't know you were doing one as well. So I went and read it. It's a good read as well! Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted September 19, 2016 Author Share Posted September 19, 2016 Hello to anyone reading this, firstly (is that even a word) I apologize for disappearing and shutting down the story for quite awhile. Secondly (I'm almost positive that's a word) I hope I'll be able to continue writing but school continues to get me down. Lastly, I thank all of you who have read chris' story and I hope you enjoyed what's gone on so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted September 19, 2016 Share Posted September 19, 2016 *uses old man voice* welcome back to the official ark foru- *dies* anyways jokes aside, welcome back to the forums! You my friend have missed a lot! Glad to see an old and friendly face come back. That doesn't happen often. Also yes, firstly and secondly are words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfLord Posted September 19, 2016 Author Share Posted September 19, 2016 I appreciate the welcome back, it's good to see you again my friend, I've started reading your story and from what I've read, it's still a great read. I hope I'm here to stay this time, especially now that I have the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted September 19, 2016 Share Posted September 19, 2016 24 minutes ago, ElfLord said: I appreciate the welcome back, it's good to see you again my friend, I've started reading your story and from what I've read, it's still a great read. I hope I'm here to stay this time, especially now that I have the game. Don't forget the dossiers..so many of them now. But anyways, I'm glad that you're back and I look forward to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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