Hi guys I am going to present Chapter 1 now so you all have something to read and reply to while I perfect other parts. Here it is:   Chapter 1:  Beached   When i opened my eyes, I saw nothing but a blindingly bright orange splodge that covered my entire vision. Instantly, I shielded my eyes and rolled over to one side, before I could be fully blinded,although there were still discoloured spots obstructing my vision. When I tried to get up, I discovered that my arms and legs si