Hi guys, I made this post so I could submit a piece of fanfiction that I am currently working on. Please reply, I am always happy to revieve constructive criticism and would love to hear your ideas.
Hi guys I am going to present Chapter 1 now so you all have something to read and reply to while I perfect other parts. Here it is:
Chapter 1: Beached
When i opened my eyes, I saw nothing but a blindingly bright orange splodge that covered my entire vision. Instantly, I shielded my eyes and rolled over to one side, before I could be fully blinded,although there were still discoloured spots obstructing my vision. When I tried to get up, I discovered that my arms and legs si