artwork Hello, I want to share this with you but please give me your opinion

[Erikpro]

I want to upload my creation to the Lost Island creatures voting, please give me your opinion and what I could improve so that you like it and I dont have ready the dossier but I will finish it in a few days 
 

Magmaxolotl: The Fire Titan

Magmaxolotl is a volcanic colossus that dominates the volcanoes of ARK. Its body is covered in hardened rock, with shiny cracks of magma, and when it rages, it completely engulfs in flames, becoming an unstoppable force of destruction.

Skills

Magma and Gold Projectiles: Throws balls of magma and liquid gold from his mouth, capable of destroying structures and annihilating enemies.

Molten Rock Thorns: Shoots explosive thorns from its tail with great precision.

Fury Mode: As you rage, your strength and endurance increase exponentially as your body burns intensely.

Volcanic Immunity: Resists lava, extreme heat and fire-based attacks.

Wild

In the wild, Magmaxolotl patrols the volcanoes like a true guardian. Attack any intruder with a mix of aggressiveness and intensity that makes it one of ARK's biggest challenges.

Domestication

Taming a Magmaxolotl requires facing it in direct combat, using strategies to wear it out. Once weakened, it can be submitted without the need for special taxes. Taming it ensures the control of a creature capable of razing bases and leading battles.

Weaknesses

Although powerful, its large size makes it vulnerable to rapid and aerial attacks, and its effectiveness decreases in cold climates, where the heat of its body is compromised.

Edited December 12, 2024 by Erikpro

[OverRannus]

I like it, however, I don’t know if they’ll allow it because of the name change. Obviously it’s based off the Axolotl, but it might be a bit too fantastical if you change the name from Axolotl to Magmaxolotl. And it may be a bit too close to the Magmasaur in some abilities. However other than that it’s really good!!

[Erikpro]

Magmaxolotl was the name that I put in the coment, What else can I change to get him away from the Magmasaur?

Edited December 14, 2024 by Erikpro

[OverRannus]

Maybe make it’s larger weakness is that in the cold climates causes it to hibernate instead of just being less efficient. The reason for the Magmasaur has this and makes sense with this effect is because it’s a living furnace and can always maintain enough heat, just needing more work to maintain that heat. While this is more of a Lavasioth in interpretation, in that it covers itself in somewhat hardened or soft lava to maintain heat. So if it’s in cold environments, have it rapidly cool down the lava and slowly or otherwise gain torpor while in colder conditions.

Maybe also instead of spewing a gold fire ball, have it more as a defensive play style instead compared to the Magmasaur. Taking reduced damage and at the same time dealing damage back passively. Maybe also make its melee deal fire damage per hit. Or adds a new mechanic that with each bite, stack pyrokenetic energy. And once fully charged. Allow it to start dealing fire damage with each bite over a short period of time.

Or maybe it burps up Lava, keeping liquid lava in specially designed glands that allow it to burp short range attacks that deal fire damage and slow down opponents.

Edited December 14, 2024 by OverRannus