Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Share Posted January 16, 2016 Ark: Rising Obelisks Authors Notes: welcome to the official Ark: Rising Obelisks forum! I have a dossier page as well however that's strictly for my dossiers. This will contain everything else. Below I will contain the lore and some type of notice board telling you what's currently being worked on! Enjoy! notice board: currently being worked on: - chapter 8: the murderer - survivor chapter 3: (not one prepared yet) - dossier: World eaters, MOAR DRAGONS AND WYVERNS! Plus more prehistoric fauna! - artwork: An early breakfast.. - 'The Official Ark Bestiary & Guide: An Insight of Our New Neighbours & New Home. A massive guide created by the magnificent Clark Burton; the man who travelled the entire island himself! The guide discusses about the Ark, it's environments, it's flora and fauna, diseases and the tribes, cities and past history of our time being on the island! More notes to come! Lore/ Background Info: The creators, also known as ‘The Krions’, are known as the most powerful beings in the entire galaxy. One of their Key Strengths is they’re intelligence. They can know anything about everything just but simply touching it (except living organisms, they can only read their minds). They’re planet colonisers, increasing the population from one planet to another, but to do that, they believe they must eliminate the most powerful being on the planet. To do that, a small dropship flies around the planet to kidnap a large group of the most powerful beings that inhabit the planet. They transport them to what is known as ‘the Ark’ for ‘Trials’. They drop them off and observe how they react to different things. They beings have nothing but a small implant that allows them to know everything about anything, so the Krions can see how powerful they can get with their tech. They continue to observe them and add more beings to island to see if they’re sociable or not. They observe their strengths and weaknesses to determine on how to take over their world. Once they all die out (or if the Krions have all the information they need), the krions leave and eliminate the powerful beings on the planet so they can take over. They only leave a few alive as prisoners (they don’t things being extinct. they’re basically collectors) The Trials only last a few months (human months) until they all die on the Ark, Except for Humans. The Humans continued to surprise the Krions with their intelligence, socialising and most importantly, their stubbornness. No matter how hard the occasion, the humans kept pushing forward. For Centuries, The Krions have never had a rival…..until they discovered the Humans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 Ok I'm having trouble uploading pictures from my iPad.....any help?? Edit: don't worry I'm using snipping tool to snip the pics I posted on Instagram and copy them here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 Ok so there is a rough and crappy drawing I made for 'The Krion' This is the highest rank in the Krion Army. It is called the Krion Overlord. They are the leaders. The mouth is very complicated and those tentacles and serpent shoulders can move. The part in the middle of the mouth that looks like a giant smiley face (between those two other bottom jaws) is a flap that opens and closes. When it opens it shows rows and small and sharp teeth (bit like the kraken from evolve) The tentacles (or hair) can come out like some weird looking dilophosaur frill. And the snakes on the shoulders can stay up like that or hide in the shoulders so you can only see the top of their heads (inspiration from snake neck turtles when they hide in their shells). I will do a better drawing of a Krion but my main project is on a Satanthosaurus Standing over two rexes it has just killed (that would be in the story). Ill also add the differnet ranks of Krions too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 Artwork will take longer to do but ill try and do as much as I can. Ill probably post pics at the end when I finish the story. Also the last thing Ill probably post is the pics with colour. Depending if I want to or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 Ok I can see the images are showing up. Any help? Edit: FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 If you're interested in more Ark: Rising Obelisk lore, DM me on Instagram. My fanfic account is Ark_Rising_Obelisk. if you cant find that account, then follow my main account which is _Samuel_carter_. Both profile pics are a drawing of a carnivorous dinosaur. (Satanthosaurus if you wanted to know and yes that is a fictional dinosaur I made up) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 I try posting it from my computer but they say the file is too big or whatever Edit: FIXED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 Authors Notes: Alright folks. Get ready for Chapter 1. Welcome and thank you for reading Ark: Rising Obelisks. Btw just cause I’m 14 doesn’t mean you can’t go hard on me. Give me all the criticism you want (as long as it’s reasonable) Feel free to ask questions or point out issues or ideas and I’ll change the chapter as fast as I can. I do like to warn you, the characters in this story may swear from time to time. Chapter 1: The Survivor I lay there for quite some time, my vision was a blur. I could feel the sun’s rays on my skin and the hot sand beneath me. I didn’t know where I was or how I got here, but judging from the smell of sea water, I was laying on a beach. My body felt numb and I struggled to move. My vision began to clear once I blinked a few times. The bright sun began to blind me as soon as my vision cleared. I closed my eyes again and successfully managed to lift my left arm, ignoring the pins and needles, to block my face from the sunlight; however a new light began to shine in my face. I opened my eyes in shock to see a strange looking implant sticking out from my arm. I stood up to observe the implant better in the sun light. The strange implant was under my skin but half of it was sticking out of my arm. It had a diamond like shape with another two diamonds inside it. The middle diamond was thinner than the inner and outer two and was bright red, as if it had a light source. The other two were black and didn’t appear to have a light source. I began to panic; worried about why it was there and how it got there. The red diamond immediately began to change colour into a bright yellow. I panicked even more, thinking that it might do something to harm me. My fear began to consume me and so I began to scratch at my skin to try and take the implant out. Nothing happened. I looked around the beach, hearing only my panting breath. Small, shining stones and mangled twigs covered the golden beach. There was also palm trees and what appears to be a forest directly next to the beach. I ran to a sharp twig and grabbed it, and then I began to dig out the implant with the stick. A giant surge of pain ran through my arm and moved up and around my body, causing me to drop the stick and fall to the floor. I screamed as loud as I could. My voice echoed in the distance and a flock of birds flew out of the trees in shock, squawking and screeching. I felt as if I was on fire from the inside, put also as if there was electricity running through my body, paralysing me. The surge went for another minute until it stopped. I couldn’t get my body to stop shaking and I couldn’t breathe. I tried to breathe by imagining myself inhaling and exhaling. Eventually it worked and I was my normal self again “Well f**k,” I said, breathing heavily, “Let’s not do that again”. The implant began to vibrate. I decided to check out what was wrong. The blood flowing from where I jabbed my skin began to run over the strange implant so cautiously wiped it off, worried it might hurt me again. The colour changed back to red, but a sixth of red was missing, instead, it was a bright purple, I examined closer to see the red slowly rise over the purple. Eventually the top of the implant was back to red. It was strange. I didn’t know what it meant. But I wasn’t gonna wait and see what would happen if it turned completely purple. I got back up to see that the sun was slowly descending over the horizon. The air became cooler and my implant slowly began to turn white. “So when I get cold it turns white?” I said to myself, managing to pull a small smile. “Nice. It’s like a little indicator” The more I knew about this implant, the calmer I got. But it also made me realise that I wasn’t wearing any clothes besides some white underwear. I looked down embarrassed, and made sure nothing was around to see me half naked. From what I saw the beach was deserted. Everything was normal except from one rock. It was too far away to see what was wrong with it but it appeared to be….moving. It could’ve been a mirage but the beach is too cold so it either must be my vision or it isn’t a rock. As I walked closer to it, the better I could see what it really was. It appeared to be a group of lizards fighting something, but I didn’t know what. I decided to yell and wave my hands around so they could see. Luckily it worked and the strange lizards scurried off into the forest. All that was left was a small humanoid figure. “Oh c**p is that a child?” I questioned myself, “Hey! It’s gonna be ok I’m gonna save you!” I quickly dashed for the child. As I got closer I began to doubt my vision. I stopped and looked down at a bloodied monkey. Damn it why is my vision so terrible all of a sudden. The small monkey looked up at me in pain. The poor creature had bite marks all over it, and what appears to be a broken leg. He didn’t look like any monkey or ape I studied in labs or zoos. But he did remind me of a certain monkey that I couldn’t pin point in my head. He could’ve been an endangered species or even a whole new species. He raised his trembling arm at me. I knew I would be a bad person if I left him here to die, especially if he is the last of his kind, but I’ll also have to deal with carrying a monkey the whole time until I find a vet. “Oh screw it, you can come with me” I said to him, gently picking him off the ground. He nestled himself behind my left shoulder and help himself up with his muscular arms. Now I have a new little companion, it would be polite to give him a name. I smiled at him as he buried is face on my cheek. “From now on I’ll call you Chimp” I said. That seemed to make him really happy and tried to bounce up and down despite his injuries. The beach was a beautiful place to sit down and relax during sunset, but I knew I couldn’t stay at the beach and freeze to death. I needed to go inland, maybe that way I could find civilisation, or at least someone I could call for help. I picked up the stick again to use as a small weapon and marched into the dark forest, completely unaware of the dangers that lurked inside. The forest was a lot louder and darker than the beach. Lots of birds squawking and screeching at each other, but you couldn’t tell where exactly the birds where. Chimp held onto my shoulder a bit tighter. He was probably worried about the small lizards that attacked him. I continued to move forward until my eyes adjusted to the darkness. My feet began to ache from kicking too many roots and stones. A few bushes rustled behind me as I was walking. Chimp began to bark in an aggressive manner so I had no choice to see what it was. It was still too dark to see anything so I used the glowing implant to my advantage. I raised my arm and used it as a torch to see what I couldn’t see with my own eyes. Out from the bushes appeared a dodo. “A dodo?” I stood there amazed to see such a creature. “I thought they were extinct! But how?” The dodo looked at me unimpressed, as if it was offended that someone would dare say to it that it should be dead. Even Chimp looked at me dispassionately. “This…This is fantastic!” I just found probably one of the last dodos in the world!” I yelled. “This is a huge discovery!” Sadly I couldn’t take a photo to prove it, and before I knew it the dodo disappeared into the bush. It may be the last dodo in the world but it sure is a rude one. I shrugged my shoulders and moved on, only to trip and fall down a small mudslide and land in a small, little river. My body began to ache again and the implant buzzed again. I looked at it to see a tiny little fraction of red turned purple and slowly rising back to red. “I guess it’s a health bar of some sort” I said. “It could come in handy if I was in a fight”. Chimp ran over to me shaking in fear and continued to nudge me to get up. “Alright, alright I’ll get u- Oh Jesus!” I yelled, staring down at a decaying human corpse. I grabbed Chimp and rose to my feet. Strange hissing sounds surrounding us. Chimp began to whimper in fear. My implant began to glow yellow again, but it was brighter than ever. A high pitch screech came from behind me so I shun the implant at whatever made the sound. It was a small compsognathus. I stared at chimp with a smirk on my face. “Really? You’re scared of a small liz...”A larger theropod jumped out of the bushes and snatched up the small reptile and ate it right in front of us. The predator began to toy with its food before swallowing it whole. Its two crests shinned in the bright moonlight. The medium sized theropod stood up and looked down at me. I stared back at the large and terrifying dilophosaurus. The rest of the pack emerged from the shadows and surrounded me and Chimp. They began to talk to each other, raising their frills at one another. “Frills?”I said confused. “Hang on, dilophosaurs didn’t have frills”. Right now wasn’t the time to question dinosaurs and palaeontology, especially if you’re gonna be eaten by the creatures you’ve been studying for 7 years. I was trapped….surrounded….outsmarted. These creatures seem to have done this a million times. I bet this is what happened to the dead guy on the floor. I was defenceless, My stick was washed away down the small river, but at list I had chimp on my side who had better ideas instead of waiting to die. He full on took a cr*p and flung it at the largest dilo in the eyes. The beast wailed and was spitting green slime everywhere until if finally tripped and fell on another dilophosaur. It was my time to escape. Air was gushing towards my face as I sprinted out of the trap. I was free. The dinosaurs did not dare to follow me as I was too fast for them. An unknown creature tackled me from my side while I wasn’t paying attention. I stood up quickly to find out I was tackled by another person. He must’ve accidently ran into me. He looked up at me with fear in his eyes and his implant glowing bright yellow. “Run!” He said “Weird raptor thingys chasing us.” He got onto his feet and bolted. Strange chirping noises came from where he originally came from. A small pack troodons were sprinting straight towards us. My jaw dropped and I sprinted towards the other guy and followed him. “Where are we going?” I yelled trying to catch my breath. “Theres an opening ahead with friendly dinosaurs” The unknown man replied. “And when I mean friendly I mean ‘they won’t eat us’ friendly”. I looked back to see the pack catching up, snapping their jaws away and jumping over each other, trying to get to us before the rest of the pack could. As I looked back I could see a bright opening, giving us a good view of the full moon. Yes, freedom. Maybe the other guy could find a way to get rid of the pests behind us. Hang on, where is he? I stopped and turned back. The stranger appeared to have been caught on one of the tree roots and fell to the floor. I couldn’t leave him there, not for those ba*tards to get him. I quickly helped him up to his feet and he bolted, however I was now caught. One of the troodons somehow took a shortcut and has pinned me to the ground, mauling at my arm. The pain was excruciating, it got worse when its teeth sunk deeper into my skin. My arm began to burn and it turned black. I screamed for help, and thankfully I got some. Chimp came back with the stranger and the smacked the raptor with a small log. He helped me up and we left the jungle. It got brighter and colder once we left the dangerous forest, but it was sure as hell beautiful. We were basically hidden between a large herd of herbivores, all from different species both big and small. The troodons were too smart to just run in and get us so they gave up and turned back. I would’ve been happy if I wasn’t bitten by the raptor. The pain became worse every time I inhaled and exhaled. The bite must’ve been poisonous. The venom began affecting my lungs, and cancelled my breathing. “Hey are you alright?” The stranger said to me. I would’ve replied but I began choking on my own tongue. I held onto my mouth, but I lost control over my body. I fell to the floor and began to slowly suffocate and lose consciousness. Authors Notes: Well there you have it guys. Chapter 1 completed. Originally I was gonna have Chapter 1 and 2 together but I was worried that It’ll be too long, plus I wanted to build up the tension. But if you guys feel like this chapter or a different chapter should be longer or should be changed/fixed, PLEASE let me know. I just want to make the fan fic amazing but I know I can’t do it without your help! J Also I kind of left you hanging with the implant situation. That will be resolved later in the story Please feel free to leave a comment and your feedback. I made a new account just about this fan fic. The account is called Ark_Rising_Obelisks. If you’re interested, do have a look. There is nothing on there yet but there will eventually. Peace out and chapter 2 will be coming out in the next couple of days! J Yes it has been updated to be a bit longer. Most chapters might get daily updates time to time. There will be possible grammar issues but ill check them out and fix them as soon as I can. Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 I had to censor the swear words out cause it would change to 'raptor' if I didn't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindsweptDragon Posted January 17, 2016 Share Posted January 17, 2016 Nice work , Id work on the spelling and grammer though. Titles spelled wrong and the first sentence should read lay instead if laid, possibly others but two mistakes in the first two things you read may put people off. Id also either make the chapters longer or hold off posting till you have more written. Good luck though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 6 minutes ago, WindsweptDragon said: Nice work , Id work on the spelling and grammer though. Titles spelled wrong and the first sentence should read lay instead if laid, possibly others but two mistakes in the first two things you read may put people off. Id also either make the chapters longer or hold off posting till you have more written. Good luck though. Thanks for the feedback. I'll make sure to have more written in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 8 minutes ago, WindsweptDragon said: Nice work , Id work on the spelling and grammer though. Titles spelled wrong and the first sentence should read lay instead if laid, possibly others but two mistakes in the first two things you read may put people off. Id also either make the chapters longer or hold off posting till you have more written. Good luck though. is there a way to edit the title? cause I don't know how Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindsweptDragon Posted January 17, 2016 Share Posted January 17, 2016 I think it should just be a case of editing your OP and changing the title there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 Just now, WindsweptDragon said: I think it should just be a case of editing your OP and changing the title there. I fixed it. thank you Also i'll probably leave this chapter short. Just so it can be like an introduction to the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 I'll also be doing survivor profiles. First I'll write info about the survivor or animal and then try to do a portrait of them (Be warned humans aren't my specialty ). Basically this is to help readers become more attached and know the characters a bit more (hopefully ) So lets start with our main character that we already know. Chris Shaw Name: Christian James Shaw (prefers being called Chris over Christian) DOB: 20th of February, 2002 (yes the year in this story is 2037. Probably should've mentioned that earlier) Age: 34 Gender: Male Nationality: Australian Appearance : Height is 6.1 feet tall. Has shaggy blonde hair. Blue eyes. Tanned Skin. no beard. muscular (but does not have extreme muscles like body builders or wrestlers ) he is what you would say good looking. Attitude: Friendly but tough Profession: Started off as a zoologist but then moved on to become a palaeontologist Intelligence: Extreme School Years: had no issues in primary school but got bullied once or twice in high school for being a teachers pet. luckily for him he had friends to back him up. Family. Mother died when giving birth to him. Chris shaw was an only child. His father raised him himself. Is now currently fighting Cancer. Tribe: Tribe of Tyrants Position: animal caretaker/tamer. Will sometimes be second in command with Alice. Relationship: Single. Known Information: ever since he was younger he was obsessed with dinosaurs. It was like his favourite thing to talk about. Once a week he would look up a dinosaur and read every known piece of information there is to know about it. His favourite dinosaurs were dire wolf, Kaprosuchus, ceratosaurus, megaraptor and Austrolovenator. He is a kind and helpful person if you met him and he will always fight for the right thing, no matter what the cost (he screamed at a teacher in grade 2 for not letting the students go to lunch once) He is basically a natural born leader. He always had a thing with animals, the animals liked him too. When he was little, his dad got him a pet parrot. Everyday he will sit with the parrot and he would teach him to talk. Chris is a very secretive person and will always keep secrets so know one else will know. (this may look like irrelevant and has nothing to do with the story but it does ) Strengths: Born leader, people look up to him, brave, isn't afraid to do the right thing for others, intelligent, has a healthy relationship with others. Weaknesses: Can become too attached. Does not let things go too easily, is helpfulness and curiosity gets him into trouble. Anything else that you readers would like to know about Chris? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 1 hour ago, WindsweptDragon said: Id also either make the chapters longer or hold off posting till you have more written. Speaking of which, I've decided to add more on chapter 1. I want Chris to at least survive a night on the island before chapter 2. More editing. So exciting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 18, 2016 Author Share Posted January 18, 2016 I'm thinking of ways to expand chapter 1 in my head and I want Chris to tame his first animal and survive a night. But I don't know which animal. I'm thinking of him taming a mesopithicus or a dodo. But I don't know which one. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 19, 2016 Author Share Posted January 19, 2016 Pictures are working! Scroll up to see the rough version of my Krion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 23, 2016 Author Share Posted January 23, 2016 Thought I should show you what I'm working on. That dinosaur is a hybrid I made for my fan fic called 'Satanthosaurus Saevabellum'. It can also be Diabolicanthosaurus Saevabellum but that's for people who prefer saying that over satanthosaurus, But satanthosaurus will be usually heard in the book over diabolicanthosaurus because its simpler and easier to pronounce than diabolicanthosaurus. It will be the largest land carnivore in my story and will be the strongest one too. (Meaning it could take down titanosaurs if it used its brain) I'll might as well tell you some things about it. This carnivore is a lot different than other tyrants like giganotosaurus furiosa and tyrannosaurus dominion. The satanthosaurus is smarter, stronger, has a septic bite, can climb with its hooked claws, is faster, is immune to poisons, and is impossible to be knocked out. Basically if you start tranqing it with tranquilliser darts, nothing will happen, instead it will actually go into a rage. However this rage is different from a gigas. The satanthosaurus is smart enough to control is anger. So if he goes into a rage, he'll know exactly what he's doing and he won't throw off his rider. There has been reports of a adult male satantho that had broken out of a metal facility because they smoked him with narcotic gas. The pachyrinosaurs were killed before they could calm it. Another difference between it and other carnivores is that it's cannibalistic nature. Once a baby satantho is hatched, the mother will take care of it for a few weeks until it's a youngling, then the baby will have to leave so it doesn't get killed by its parents. So when they're younger, they form packs of young satanthosaurs, making them formidable at a young age. They will then split up once they get close to adulthood (otherwise it'll become a blood bath) even though they are in a pack when there younger, they don't have pack mentality, they're stronger when they're alone. But they're even stronger when they're with their mate. So usually it's best to have one male and one female. Domestication: like I said before satanthos are impossible to knock out and tame. And they're tough scales prevent arrows and darts from penetrating it. Even if you knock one out with a bolder you can't keep it asleep because it will instantly wake up in a raging frenzy from you feeding it narcotic.......however there is one way to tame one......it is risky though. The best way to tame a satantho is by stealing an egg from big mamma and hatching it yourself (may sound easy but it's hard to get the mother to lose you. Oh and the baby bites so you might need to do the troodon taming method when it hatches) there are two main stages in a satanthos life. Teenager and adulthood. You can ride the satantho at both of those stages. But there are two different saddles. The teenager is just bigger than a Carno and the adult is larger than a giga. To be able to ride a teenager, you must have fed it rare flowers (in my fan fic, they stop the growth of any animal except humans) and if you want it to grow you feed it mushrooms. Usually you'd have one adult female and one adult male and one teenage male and one teenage female(because they don't like socialising with others that are not its mate. They'll just kill them. adults will only accept two teenagers which will have to be a male a female too)the adults are usually the two Royal guards for the tribes who build their bases on a titanosaur or giant war mounts, big enough to host more than one person on its saddle. The teenagers are usually smaller war mounts or scouts that can deal damage and can take in a lot of damage. The teenagers also have a sneaking mechanic too so they can pounce creatures smaller than it. Like the adults, they can also climb (even large dinos like the sauropods) The teenagers can carry up to 3 people including the rider. Once tamed, the satantho is a powerful ally for you army and can be used to climb up (or jump onto and climb. Yes they can jump) onto mountains or titanosaurs. They're also destroy stone. However once in rage mode (which isn't that long since they control their anger) they can start to slightly damage metal. One of the only problems with taming a satantho is feeding it. Once it gets hungry it will soon get angry and start killing dinos in your tribe just so it can eat (mainly your large dinos) it's septic bite can do a lot of damage and has a bleeding affect (can move onto sickness if not cured) to calm a satantho (if it's wild or on an enemy tribe) you must use a lot of calm gas or a one or two pachyrinosaurs. It has a few attacks. There is the biting, slashing and scratching, Using the tail as a whip or blade, using its hooked claws to pounce on large prey to hold on and start mauling and of course the charging. As impossible as it is to tame one, it is definitely worth it. authors notes: you're probably wondering why hell is it so OP and stuff. In my fan fic, the apex hybrids (like this one) are practically tameable bosses. The Krions introduced the hybrids/mutations to eradicate the humans on the Ark, to see how the humans will react to such a stronger foe. If this was somehow in game, Itll be almost impossible to tame, since dinos don't produce fertilised eggs and if they do, the satanthos will only lay on fertilised egg every few game weeks/months. And if you do obtain one, the mother and father will track you down its best to have a fast flier with you so they lose sight of you. But before you obtain one you'll need to distract it by having a tribe member distract them. If you don't have a tribe (or if they're offline)then it's best to have a quetzal and drop down a very high level mammoth of yours so they'll kill it and you'll have a chance to quickly grab the egg and fly off. But the mother will know you grabbed it (cause of typical mother instinct). Well that's my boring dossier. Hope you guys like the new apex predator that will be coming in my story. Just to remind you this isn't a fan dossier that I think should be in game. If you have any questions just ask and I'll be happy to answer. You Guys have a good day Also just to let you know there 3 other apex hybrids that'll I'll be introducing. Maybe 4 or 5 more! Peace out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 23, 2016 Author Share Posted January 23, 2016 Also the in picture, that is when Chris and his tribe see the satanthosaurs (or diabolicanthosaurus). It's killed two rexes and scared off a giga. On the right will be a dead parasaur the rexes were eating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 23, 2016 Author Share Posted January 23, 2016 I'd also like to say I won't be home for a few more days so I can't continue to add onto chapter 1. But before I go any further does anybody want say what dinosaurs they'd like to see in the fan fic that aren't in game? Every dinosaur that is in game or confirmed will be in the story. But I know that there are people who'd like to see other dinosaurs. So does anybody have requests. They'll be given credit and the dinosaur will be mentioned in the story. They'll will even have their own 'dino chapter' or 'side chapter' in the book like every other dinosaur. If you want to know which dinosaurs that have been requested that will be in the fan fic, I'll edit my first post and you'll see them there. Also like to point out that hyrids/mutations and other mytholigical creatures (bosses, dragons, other weird aliens, Krions) WILL be in the story and I won't be changing my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 25, 2016 Author Share Posted January 25, 2016 Chapter 1 has been updated and finished. It is now longer and ready for people to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xdrone Posted January 31, 2016 Share Posted January 31, 2016 Chapter 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted January 31, 2016 Author Share Posted January 31, 2016 23 minutes ago, Xdrone said: Chapter 2? Hi. Sorry about chapter 2. It might be a bit longer than I anticipated since I've gone back to school and there's lots of work to do, as well as completing to pieces of artwork for the story. But don't worry. You'll see it in a couple weeks (maybe in a few days ) sorry for the wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaprodonychus Posted February 7, 2016 Author Share Posted February 7, 2016 Ok while I write Chapter 2 I might give you a taste of an animal I am introducing in Chapter 2. My first official fan made dossier for a thanks for everyone that is reading this and is excited and patient for the upcoming chapters. First one I'll do is.....the balaur Bondoc Name: Balaur Species: Balaur Jongler (meaning trickster Dragon in Romanian) Time: Late Cretaceous Temperament: Aggressive. Wild: Despite its original predecessor, Balaur Bondoc, being around the size as and average Pyroraptor, Balaur Jongler is the second largest raptor to date. Just under Utahraptor Prime’s height by a few inches, Balaur Jongler is a lot more terrifying and smarter than any other KNOWN animal on the Ark. They use their two sickle claws on each foot to climb up mountains and trees; even larger animals! You would usually packs of Balaur Jonglers perched in trees, waiting for prey to come close by so they can pounce and tear their prey apart. Known Information: Unlike Utahraptor Prime, this raptor is an assassin/opportunist. It usually uses its stealth and intelligence to take down large prey. It can pounce any animal with ease due to its powerful legs and sharp sickle claws. This beast eat has poisonous spurs hidden it its feathers, slowly paralysing their prey, making them an easier kill. Even though its pack mentality makes them stronger and can take down predators with no problem, the Balaur Jongler has another trick up its sleeve. This animal has the ability to make certain calls that are made from different animals around the island, such as a help call, a mating call, and it can even mimic a Giganotosaurus roar to scare off other predators or to cause a stampede. However, they have yet to master human speech…… I hope… Domesticated: The Balaur Bondoc is a hard animal to tame if you don’t have a flier. The best way to tame one is to single out the alpha of the pack pick it up and drop in in a cage and forcefully tame it that way. Once the alpha is tamed, the rest of the pack will obey you and your tamed alpha. Tribes mainly use this animal as an assassin to lure other members or dinosaurs from other tribes away by using the raptor’s mimic ability. Then the raptors pounce their enemy or prey and the victim is usually dead in a couple of minutes. If they got enough melee damage, they can usually instantly kill weaker dinosaurs and even survivors wearing flak Armor. They can even drag small to medium animals away and can even climb up while dragging them as long as their dead or unconscious. Others use this beast to scale high mountains or climb up titanosaurs or brontosaurs to raid their bases; however it slowly depletes stamina faster than just sprinting. Tribes can even use their mounts spurs to paralyse, knock out and even kill their enemies...Or even create antidotes. The only cons with this animal is its low carry weight, standard health and fear of fire. Other than that, its speed, strength and endurance makes this creature an excellent beast to tame. Hp: medium carry weight: low speed: very high damage: very high stam: high Author’s notes (and other Information): I love stealthy animals and there isn’t that much stealthy dinosaurs in game so I decided to create an intelligent and stealthy dinosaur that can climb almost any surface. Once you tamed one, it would follow you around (even if you whistle stop following) to listen to you speaking. It will use this grammar against other survivors so they can take them out one by one. However if you don’t want to be stealthy it you can just level up its health a little bit to make it a good war mount like dire wolf and sabre cats (possibly like a carno). It also has a good jump height and is rideable, has different sitting spots. When it stands normally, you sit up like when you ride a normal raptor, but when it crouches/sneaks or is climbing up/down you lay on its back like how you lay on a megalodon’s back when you’re riding it. You can also create and Armor called ‘Jongler Armor’ so you don’t look as noticeable while riding one. It basically makes you less detectable from dinosaurs and humans. It’s made from Balaur Jongler skin and feathers. While climbing you can also stop climbing (as in just hold onto the animal while not moving) you can also jump off on the animal when your wish and can even jump onto another animal. Like I said before they can drag unconscious or dead animals, if they pounce first and the victim is still alive, they can drag them away while they’re still alive. The victim is paralysed during this time and can only call for help. I'd also like to mention I made it a raptor instead of a flightless bird because I think it would have been cooler and more useful if it was a raptor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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